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Co-authored-by: Kitsune Ral <Kitsune-Ral@users.sf.net>

proposals/2844-global-versioning.md

@@ -113,10 +113,10 @@ For example: `["v1.1", "r0.6.1"]`.
 "room versions" are called "room editions" and the Matrix version refers to what this proposal is
 introducing. This MSC does not propose renaming "room versions" - that is another MSC's problem.
 
-Room editions are a bit special in that they have their own versioning scheme as other servers need to
+Room editions are a bit special in that they have their own versioning scheme as servers and, potentially,
-be aware of how to process the room. As such, a room edition's versioning scheme is not altered by this
+clients need to be aware of how to process the room. As such, a room edition's versioning scheme is not
-proposal, however the publishing of the (in)stability of a given edition is now covered by the newly
+altered by this proposal, however the publishing of the (in)stability of a given edition is now covered by the
-proposed Matrix version.
+newly proposed Matrix version.
 
 Whenever a room edition transitions from stable to unstable, or unstable to stable, or is introduced
 then it would get counted as a feature for a `MINOR` release of Matrix. We don't currently have a plan