diff --git a/docsite/rst/playbooks_delegation.rst b/docsite/rst/playbooks_delegation.rst
index 992b7d8171d..0f4710b9b14 100644
--- a/docsite/rst/playbooks_delegation.rst
+++ b/docsite/rst/playbooks_delegation.rst
@@ -250,20 +250,20 @@ use the default remote connection type::
 Interrupt execution on any error
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-With option ''any_errors_fatal'' any failure on any host in a multi-host play will be treated as fatal and Ansible will exit immediately without waiting for the other hosts.
+With the ''any_errors_fatal'' option, any failure on any host in a multi-host play will be treated as fatal and Ansible will exit immediately without waiting for the other hosts.
 
-Sometimes ''serial'' execution is unsuitable - number of hosts is unpredictable (because of dynamic inventory), speed is crucial (simultaneous execution is required). But all tasks must be 100% successful to continue playbook execution.
+Sometimes ''serial'' execution is unsuitable; the number of hosts is unpredictable (because of dynamic inventory) and speed is crucial (simultaneous execution is required), but all tasks must be 100% successful to continue playbook execution.
 
-For example there is a service located in many datacenters, there a some load balancers to pass traffic from users to service. There is a deploy playbook to upgrade service deb-packages. Playbook stages:
+For example, consider a service located in many datacenters with some load balancers to pass traffic from users to the service. There is a deploy playbook to upgrade service deb-packages. The playbook has the stages:
 
 - disable traffic on load balancers (must be turned off simultaneously)
-- gracefully stop service
-- upgrade software (this step includes tests and starting service)
-- enable traffic on load balancers (should be turned off simultaneously)
+- gracefully stop the service
+- upgrade software (this step includes tests and starting the service)
+- enable traffic on the load balancers (which should be turned on simultaneously)
 
-Service can't be stopped with "alive" load balancers, they must be disabled, all of them. So second stage can't be played if any server failed on "stage 1".
+The service can't be stopped with "alive" load balancers; they must be disabled first. Because of this, the second stage can't be played if any server failed in the first stage.
 
-For datacenter "A" playbook can be written this way::
+For datacenter "A", the playbook can be written this way::
 
     ---
     - hosts: load_balancers_dc_a
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ For datacenter "A" playbook can be written this way::
         command: /usr/bin/enable-dc
 
 
-In this example Ansible will start software upgrade on frontends only if all load balancers are successfully disabled.
+In this example Ansible will start the software upgrade on the front ends only if all of the load balancers are successfully disabled.
 
 .. seealso::